HW12C due 6/8: PBA Final Draft and Index Cards

PBA Groups at the Bottom. Use this list of names for your Index Cards!

1. PBA–Final Draft (5-7 pages) due Monday!

General Formatting:

  • Double-spaced; size 12 font; Times New Roman or similar
  • .75 margins on both left and right sides. Justify margin. Indentations– .5” or 1 tab space.
  • All pages beyond the first page should be numbered.  Page numbers should be placed at the bottom right of each page.
  • No Cover Page.  Include name, class, and date (Single space the heading)
  • Be sure TITLE reflects the theme of the essay (for instance, 1984: Hierarchical Hegemony)
  • Include Title, Author, and General Theme of work in first paragraph of essay…For Example—Jean Paul Sartre’s Nausea
  • Follow MLA guidelines

Order of Arrangement:

  • Final Draft on top. Staple.
  • 1st Draft—with significant corrections made + name of reader. Everyone is expected to have edited a peer’s essay.

Avoid the Following:

  • Avoid Pronouns: I, it, you, me, we, us
  • Avoid Troublesome language. Do your best to avoid the following words: it, these, this, those, kind of, almost, seems, maybe, like, then, later, eventually, basically, so, many, a lot, things, due to the fact (or any variations of the fact that), in reality, very, really, forms of the verb “to be”
  • In the intro, nix all book-review commentary—i.e. “is fascinating, interesting…”
  • Avoid meaningless sentences–i.e. “Authors rely heavily on symbolism.”
  • Contractions
  • While I am not suggesting that you avoid all modifiers, you certainly should be conscious of how you are using them. Yet, definitely avoid the likes of really, basically, very, excellent, terrible, etc.
  • Avoid misspelling proper nouns!

Remember:

  • When writing about literature, write in the present tense.
  • Active voice should be your default voice and only use passive when you are CHOOSING to use passive voice.
  • Get comfortable writing in complex and compound sentences.
  • Introductions and conclusions are factored into the grading of this essay.
  • Read your essay aloud and you will hear many diction and syntax issues.

Keys to Good Writing:

  • Cohesion—Every sentence fits together; paragraphs flow smoothly.  Ensure that the entire discussion comes together as one unified discussion of your text and its context.
  • Concision—Less is more.  Use fewer words to explain yourself.  Begin fusing sentences by merging ideas into tightly knit phrases.
  • Precision—Accuracy.  Use words that accurately capture what you mean.  Don’t settle for words or expressions that come close.
  • Coherence—Does your essay make sense? Are your ideas organized in a logical sequence? Do you prove your thesis? Do the parts contain the essence of the whole?

2. Some Kinds Words–Index Cards

  1. Eve Grassfield/Andrew Soblesohn/Clare Zad
  2. Diego Romero/Tubaa Shahid/Carla Tabares
  3. Ruby Walsh/Matthew Linton/Arielle Chaifetz
  4. Shrien Alshabasy/Rafaele Macdougall/Tenzin Dolma
  5. Keosha Mondesir/Wesley Knoll/Marcela Artia-enamorado
  6. Olivia Anastasio/Natalia Mayrant/Max Hyams
  7. Tricia Cavaliero/Jasmine Campise/Roland Hiller
  8. Noah Marsh/Nya Richards/Miracle Cantzlaar
  9. Nadav Burshtine/Catherine Rooney Graves/Sol Marie Quintero
  10. Eli Williams/Samrawit Solomon/Kate Macken
  11. Yeline Del Carmen/Isa Smith/Ambar Vidals
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